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BaftaBaby 
"Always entranced by cinema."

Posted - 07/23/2009 :  10:03:23  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
We seem to have neglected this sandy classic:

Lawrence of Arabia

So put your camels to bed, it's midnight at the Oasis, and there's some tribe-trouble for O'Toole. See what you can make from these Lean pickings


Abbreviated rules (re)borrowed from here to encourage some new entrants .... or old ones back.


The Rules

The first line of a haiku poem has five syllables.
The second line has seven syllables.
The third, and final, line has five syllables.

The Movie Haiku Contest (MHC) is open to every member of the FWFR site.

To enter, all you have to do is think of a Haiku for the current movie, then post into the current thread. Simple as that. Also, haikus may be risque, but nothing explicit please.

Only one entry per person as per The Blevins Rule. However, you are allowed to edit your existing entry until 9pm Tuesday FWFR time.


Voting.

If you have entered the MHC, then you have to vote. If you do not vote, you'll lose 3 points from your total, and suffer from Significant Shrinkage. This could mean the difference between Stardom and a big fat Dumpster Dive.

You do not have to enter an MHC to vote. Vote away. It'll be like a lurker vote!

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For each round, you get to vote for your three favourite haikus. The voting is as follows:

3 pts fwfr a
2 pts fwfr b
1 pt fwfr c
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You may vote only once
You cannot vote for yourself.
You can vote for the previous winner

You vote by sending me your votes in a PM (Private Message) to me.

When the voting deadline ends (9pm Wednesday 31 July FWFR time), the votes are tallied and the top three places are announced.



Edited by - BaftaBaby on 07/23/2009 10:05:29

Whippersnapper. 
"A fourword thinking guy."

Posted - 07/23/2009 :  10:27:26  Show Profile  Reply with Quote




Just picture O'Toole
lying on an Ottoman,
puffing a Camel.
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BaftaBaby 
"Always entranced by cinema."

Posted - 07/23/2009 :  14:26:53  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Guinness, Bey, Rains, well:
Lotsa drink in Pete's desert.
Bike luck deserts him.

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Beanmimo 
"August review site"

Posted - 07/23/2009 :  14:33:14  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Lawrence survived through
Aqaba and the desert
but not a bike crash.

Edited by - Beanmimo on 07/24/2009 15:23:52
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rockfsh 
"Laugh, Love, Cheer"

Posted - 07/23/2009 :  18:11:15  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Lawrence cavorting
His white desert robes flowing
Gold bands, fabulous

Edited by - rockfsh on 07/23/2009 18:13:03
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clay 
"Viewer discretion is revised."

Posted - 07/24/2009 :  03:13:12  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
At intermission
After Crossing Desert scene
Coke machines ran dry.

Edited by - clay on 07/24/2009 03:20:04
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clay 
"Viewer discretion is revised."

Posted - 07/29/2009 :  16:19:36  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
voted!
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Whippersnapper. 
"A fourword thinking guy."

Posted - 07/29/2009 :  16:22:51  Show Profile  Reply with Quote

Got on my bike and voted.
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BaftaBaby 
"Always entranced by cinema."

Posted - 07/29/2009 :  17:13:49  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
I've PM'd Beanie for his votes. YIKES - without them we have a 3-way tie.

Beanie, where are yoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

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Whippersnapper. 
"A fourword thinking guy."

Posted - 07/29/2009 :  17:37:57  Show Profile  Reply with Quote

Dublin, I believe.

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ChocolateLady 
"500 Chocolate Delights"

Posted - 07/30/2009 :  11:12:26  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Whippersnapper


Dublin, I believe.





Perhaps he hasn't had time to get to the library yet.

Hope my lurker vote helps somewhat.
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BaftaBaby 
"Always entranced by cinema."

Posted - 07/30/2009 :  11:32:20  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
OK we're now down to a 2-way tie. Let's leave it till a bit later for Beanie to connect with Earth. After that - no more missus-nice-haiku!

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BaftaBaby 
"Always entranced by cinema."

Posted - 07/30/2009 :  13:21:33  Show Profile  Reply with Quote
Okey dokey - thanks to Beanmimo camel-racing back to the oasis to score ...

we have a winner and a tie for 2/3 place. So here it is folks, cue the music, who is that out there on the horizon, the desert sands stretch far ... who IS that riding out of the haze and shimmer ... wait a minute, there's two of 'em. Are you sure? Put your shades on ...










With their camels tied together



















The shifting sands reveal

With 8 points each










With their camels tied together



























over the dunes they ride



















It's ...

rockfsh [1, 2, 1, 3, 1]
and
clay [3, 1, 2, 2]

BUT


















her camel nosing them both out with a Bo-Derek-like 10 [2, 1, 3, 1, 3]

It's ...

me again
Thanks guys for trekking through that one!

I'll be back in a bit with another loverly film.




Edited by - BaftaBaby on 07/30/2009 13:55:00
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